Rough Cut:Editors feedback

Shivani: I believe in our rough cut there are few things that need to be changed, as it doesn't fit into the mosaic video editing point of view, such as when the male character is lip syncing  its not fitting into the scenes, and it gives a feeling that he didn't know the lyrics. Also, the way the character was position into the scene it doesn't look right. Also, when the music video ends it doesn't show if the both characters did get together in the end or not. Although, there are other scenes which look good in the music video, which give the music video an understanding of what the story-line is in the video. The rough cut also gives an idea of where the scenes will be located such as the imaginary scenes. However, I still need to change some scenes of the music video, to make it look better.