Rough cut evaluation

The draft of this music video has a number of things in which needs to be fixed. For example in some of the shots, the artist and actor can be seen waiting to walk. Also some of the shots are very shaky and the camera can be seen moving. However the rough cut does tell the narrative and can be understood by audiences. This general understanding will allow audiences to be able to follow the narrative of the music video. The lighting of the scenes in the museum park and library are natural which is good as the narrative of the music video fits into this. During the performance scenes, the artists doesn't seem to be lip syncing to the music. This error in editing will be fixed for the final cut. Doing this is important as it will look more professional.