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Dear Moderator, Welcome to our blog. We created an artist called Ritik Vala for the genre of R&B and Soul. We created two differe...
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Dear Moderator, Welcome to our blog. We created an artist called Ritik Vala for the genre of R&B and Soul. We created two differe...
First Annotation: Anything about his age that fits the genre? Also, full stops are required at the end of sentences.
ReplyDeleteSecond Annotation: 'provocative clothing instead she is wearing (insert your comments) because we decided...'
Third Annotation: How is the scene typical? What is it doing that looks familiar?
Fourth Annotation: 'whilst' not 'while'
Fifth Annotation: Make the text bigger; very cramped and difficult to read
Sixth Annotation: Make the text bigger; very cramped and difficult to read
Seventh Annotation: Make text box or text appropriate size
Make sure text boxes are filled out: Either decrease the size of the boxes or make the text bigger.
A solid black box for your text might work better because at times the change in shots makes the text difficult to read.
Make sure all text boxes are onscreen long enough to read. They may be long enough already but sometimes they are difficult to read.